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David Baldacci:

Split Second

 

à About the author

àSummary

à About the book

à Extract

à About the US presidential election

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About the author David Baldacci:

“The Secret Service has always fascinated me,” David Baldacci says about the inspiration for Split Second, “because their job is so unique - so unique that a split second can mean total disaster. Talk about pressure . . . How can that not make for compelling reading?”

 

David Baldacci should know. He already sold more than thirty-four million books worldwide. This only at the age of 44. So expect him to sell a lot more books!

Before writing his first of now nine novels in 1996 he worked as a security guard, a construction worker and as a vacuum-cleaner salesman. In 1987 he got his law degree at the University of Virginia. Afterwards he worked as a lawyer until he started writing his premiere “Absolute Power”. His debut book was a big success and in 1997 a movie starring Clint Eastwood was made out of it.

 

Today David Baldacci is working on a new novel that should be published by the end of this year. When he is not writing, he dedicates a lot of time to charity. He is national ambassador for the National Multiple Sclerosis Society and participates in a lot of other charity organizations.

 

But writing remains still his passion. “I can write anywhere,” he says. “In a plane or on a train or a boat. In a corner, with a screaming child in my lap. If you wait for the perfect place, you’ll never write anything.”

 

(Source: https://www.rd.com/selecteditions/split.html)

 

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Summary:

 

"It took a split second, although to Secret Service Agent Sean King it seemed like the longest split second ever." This is the first sentence of the book. You already begin to ask yourself what happened in this split second? And why did it seem like the longest split second ever? You will find the answer to this question already in the first pages, but if you want to know the person behind the crime…. Read the story!

 

Sean King, a secret service agent, was protecting third party presidential candidate Clyde Ritter during the election campaign for he presidential election in 1996. At a campaign event the crowd moves closer to the guest of honour, when a loud bang takes King by surprise. Looking up he sees a man standing in front of him with a gun pointed at Clyde Ritter, now lying on the floor, dead. King reacts instinctively, pulls his gun and kills the assassin.

After this incident Sean King retires from the Secret Service in disgrace. He moves to a small town in Virginia, where he opens a law office. He builds his new home by a Mountain Lake, with his own hands. There, in the backcountry of Virginia, he is far away from politics, government and guns.

Eight years later third party presidential candidate John Bruno decides to have a side trip to pay his last respects to an old friend. Secret Service Agent Michelle Maxwell, who is his personal bodyguard, is angry, but has to accept Bruno’s decision. Michelle Maxwell, whose career is rocketing up, is conscious of the possibility of her getting into the white house after the election. She knows that sometimes you have to stand back to make a step forward.

Arrived at the funeral parlour, Bruno wants Michelle to leave him alone, but after a few minutes, Agent Maxwell wants to remind Bruno of their time schedule. As she enters, Bruno has disappeared. A big search party in and around the funeral parlour is not successful. Maxwell, whose fate is similar to Sean King’s, is turned into the scapegoat and gets suspended.

Sean King hears about Bruno’s disappearance in the news. He is reminded of the end of his own career with the Secret Service. The next day King goes into his office, where he finds his employee murdered.

The police suspects King of having murdered him, because he was killed with King’s gun.

Michelle Maxwell starts doing research on what had happened in the assassination of 1996. While watching the videotape of the murder, she hears some strange background noise. She feels there has to be something that was overlooked by the investigation. During her private investigation dead bodies start to show up. It seems as if everyone she visits ended up dead. That’s the point where she gets the idea that there has to be a connection between her case and the one of eight years ago. So she decides to visit Sean King.

As Michelle speaks to Sean, she tells him about her discovery: At the election campaign event King was intentionally distracted to give the murderer the possibility to take the gun out of his jacket and shoot at Clyde Ritter.

They decide to cooperate to find the person who is hidden behind the mystery. During their investigations they face a lot of adventures and have to fight for their lives.

The ending will be a big surprise for them, as it will be for you, the reader. It’s really worth a read!

 

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About the book:

 

As you can see in the summary the book is packed with a lot of action. But action itself doesn’t make a great book. Sure it’s entertaining to read this thriller, but while reading I got the impression that David Baldacci wrote this book in a hurry. Maybe he just didn’t want to investigate what’s hidden behind the Secret Service subject, or, what is more probable, he had to present a book to the editor in next to no time. I think this is the reason why I got the impression the characters are not as clearly described as in the other thrillers written by David Baldacci. Normally he really deals with the characters. He gives them a personality and throughout the whole book they act accordingly. In “Split Second” there is no such consistency. Sometimes the main characters think and act one way and later they think and act completely differently.

Surprising to me is also that the whole plot seems to be constructed. There are too many seemingly unimportant circumstances, first for a long time impeding Sean and Michelle in solving the case and afterwards making them fall over the villain, which is in no way realistic. It’s as if Baldacci takes you by the nose, wants to show you the solution and then, at the last possible moment takes you by your neck and drops you in the darkest forest you have ever seen, just to bring the book to a reasonable length of 400 pages.

One more thing that’s different from other Baldacci books is the fact that the chapters are really short. Generally a chapter is only about 4 pages long. That’s why reviewers say “split second” reads more like a play than a novel. I really agree with this opinion because the chapters are like scenes in a play or a screenplay.

Now you mustn’t think I didn’t enjoy reading this book but it is really not David Baldacci’s masterpiece. It’s even far from his best, which still is his first, “Absolute Power”.

My recommendation is quite simple. If you are looking for a thrilling action story, you are right with this one. Be careful when you start reading. Most probably you don’t want to put the book down before knowing the ending, so be sure to have at least one full day off.

On the other hand, if you are looking for a masterpiece of literature you are probably wrong in your choice of this one. Today most books are written to be sold, not to be great…

But why not read another David Baldacci book? “Absolute Power” is close to a really great piece of literature. Or at least one of the best books written in the last few years.

 

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Extract:

 

Below you find the first two chapters of the book. These two chapters explain how the two disgraced Secret Service agents got into their situation.

If you are not sure yet if you really want to read the book, just take your time and look at the excerpt from the book. But be warned! It is hard to stop in the middle of a chapter …

 

September 1996

 

It only took a split second, although to Secret Service agent Sean King it seemed like the longest split second ever.

They were on the campaign trail at a nondescript hotel meet-and-greet in a place so far out you almost had to use a satellite phone to reach the boonies. Standing behind his protectee, King scanned the crowd while his ear mike buzzed sporadically with unremarkable information. It was muggy in the large room filled with excited people waving “Elect Clyde Ritter“ pennants. There were more than a few infants being thrust toward the smiling candidate. King hated this because the babies could so easily shield a gun until it was too late. Yet the little ones just kept coming and Clyde kissed them all, and ulcers seemed to form in King’s belly as he observed this potentially dangerous spectacle.

The crowd drew closer, right up to the velvet rope stanchions that had been placed as a line in the sand. In response, King moved closer to Ritter. The palm of his outstretched hand rested lightly on the candidate’s sweaty, coatless back, so that he could pull him down in an instant if something happened. He couldn’t very well stand in front of the man, for the candidate belonged to the people. Ritter’s routine never varied: shake hands, wave, smile, nail a sound bite in time for the six-o’clock news, then pucker up and kiss a fat baby. And all the time King silently watched the crowd, keeping his hand on Ritter’s soaked shirt and looking for threats.

Someone called out from the rear of the space. Ritter answered the jibe with his own bit of humor, and the crowd laughed good-naturedly, or at least most did. There were people here who hated Ritter and all he stood for. Faces didn’t lie, not for those trained to read them, and King could read a face as well as he could shoot a gun. That’s what he spent his working life doing: reading the hearts and souls of men and women through their eyes, their physical tics.

He keyed on two men, ten feet away, on the right. They looked like potential trouble, although each wore a short-sleeved shirt and tight pants with no place to conceal a weapon. Still, he mumbled a few words into his mic, telling others of his concern. Then his gaze flitted to the clock on the back wall. It was 10:32 in the morning.

King’s gaze turned in the direction of a new sound and a new sight, something totally unexpected. Standing facing the crowd and behind the hard-politicking Ritter, he was the only one in the room who could see it. His attention stayed there for one beat, two beats, three beats, far too long. Yet who could blame him for not being able to pull his gaze away from that?

King heard the bang, like the sound of a dropped book. He could feel the moisture on his hand where it touched Ritter’s back. And now the moisture wasn’t just sweat. His hand stung where the slug had come out the body. As Ritter dropped, shrieks from the crowd poured out and then seemed to dissolve into one long, soulless moan. Feet moved and bodies gyrated. People pushed, pulled and ducked to get out of the way.

And now presidential candidate Clyde Ritter was lying right by his feet, shot through the heart. King’s gaze left the newly deceased and turned toward the shooter, a tall, handsome man wearing glasses. The killer’s Smith & Wesson .44 was still pointing at the spot where Ritter had been standing, as though waiting for the target to get back up so he could be shot all over again. The mass of panicked people held back the guards who were fighting to get through, so that King and the killer were the only ones at the party.

King pointed his pistol at the chest of the assassin. His duty clear, he fired once, and then again, dropping the man where he stood. The assassin never said a word, as though he’d expected to die like a good martyr should. And all martyrs left behind people like King, the ones blamed for letting it happen in the first place. Three men had actually died that day, and King had been one of them.

Sean Ignatius King, born August 1, 1960, died September 26, 1996, in a place he’d never even heard of until the final day of his life. And yet he had it far worse than the others who had fallen. They went tidily into their coffins and were forever mourned by those who loved them—or at least loved what they stood for. The soon-to-be-ex-Secret Service agent King had no such luck. After his death his unlikely burden was to keep right on living.

 

EIGHT YEARS LATER

 

The motorcade streamed into the tree-shaded parking lot, where it disgorged numerous people who looked hot, tired and genuinely unhappy. The miniature army marched toward the ugly white brick building. The structure had been many things in its time and currently housed a decrepit funeral home that was thriving solely because there was no other such facility within thirty miles and the dead, of course, had to go somewhere. Appropriately somber gentlemen in black suits stood next to hearses of the same color. A few bereaved trickled out the door, sobbing quietly into handkerchiefs. An old man in a tattered suit that was too large for him and wearing a battered, oily Stetson sat on a bench outside the front entrance, whittling. It was just that sort of a place, rural to the hilt, stock car racing and bluegrass ballads forever.

The old fellow looked up curiously as the procession passed by with a tall, distinguished-looking man ceremoniously in the middle. The elderly gent just shook his head and grinned at this spectacle, showing the few tobacco-stained teeth he had left. Then he took a nip of refreshment from a flask pulled from his pocket and returned to his artful wood carving.

The woman, in her early thirties and dressed in a black pantsuit, was in step behind the tall man. In the past her heavy pistol in the belt holster had scraped uncomfortably against her side, causing a scab. As a solution she'd sewn an extra layer of cloth into her blouses at that spot and learned to live with any lingering irritation. She'd overheard some of her men joke that all female agents should wear double shoulder holsters because it gave them a buxom look without expensive breast enhancement. Yes, testosterone was alive and well in her world.

Secret Service agent Michelle Maxwell was on the extreme fast track. She was not yet at the White House detail, guarding the president of the United States, but she was close. Barely nine years in the Service, and she was already a protection detail leader. Most agents spent a decade in the field doing investigative work before even graduating to protection detail as shift agents, yet Michelle Maxwell was used to getting to places before other folks.

This was her big preview before almost certain reassignment to the White House, and she was worried. This was an unscheduled stop, and that meant no advance team and limited backup. Yet because it was a last-minute change in plan, the plus side was no one could know they were going to be there.

They reached the entrance, and Michelle put a firm hand on the tall man's arm and told him to wait while they scoped things out. The place was quiet, smelled of death and despair in quiet pockets of misery centered on coffins in each of the viewing rooms. She posted agents at various key points along the man's path: "giving feet" as it was called in Service parlance. Properly done, the simple act of having a professional with a gun and communication capability standing in a doorway could work wonders.

She spoke into her walkie-talkie, and the tall man, John Bruno, was brought in. She led him down the hallway as gazes from the viewing rooms wandered to them. A politician and his entourage on the campaign trail were like a herd of elephants: they could travel nowhere lightly. They stomped the earth until it hurt with the weight of the guards, chiefs of staff, spokespersons, speechwriters, publicity folks, gofers and others. It was a spectacle that if it didn't make you laugh would at least cause you considerable worry about the future of the country.

John Bruno was running for the office of president of the United States, and he had absolutely no chance of winning. Looking far younger than his fifty-six years, he was an independent candidate who'd used the support of a small but strident percentage of the electorate fed up with just about everything mainstream to qualify for each state's national ballot. Thus, he'd been given Secret Service protection, though not at the staffing level of a bona fide contender. It was Michelle Maxwell's job to keep him alive until the election. She was counting the days.

Bruno was a former iron-balls prosecutor, and he'd made a great number of enemies, only some of whom were currently behind bars. His political planks were fairly simple. He'd tell you he wanted government off the backs of the people and free enterprise to rule. As for the poor and weak, those not up to the task of unfettered competition, well, in all other species the weak died and the strong prevailed, and why should it be any different for us? Largely because of that position, the man had no chance of winning. Although America loved its tough guys, they weren't ready to vote for leaders who exhibited no compassion for the downtrodden and miserable, for on any given day they might constitute a majority.

The trouble started when Bruno entered the room trailed by his chief of staff, two aides, Michelle and three of her men. The widow sitting in front of her husband's coffin looked up sharply. Michelle couldn't see her expression through the veil the woman was wearing but assumed her look was one of surprise at seeing this herd of interlopers invading hallowed ground. The old woman got up and retreated to a corner, visibly shaking.

The candidate whirled on Michelle. "He was a dear friend of mine," Bruno snapped, "and I am not going to parade in with an army. Get out," he added tersely.

"I'll stay," she fired back. "Just me." He shook his head. They'd had many such standoffs. He knew that his candidacy was a hopeless long shot, and that just made him try even harder. The pace had been brutal, the protection logistics a nightmare.

"No, this is private!" he growled. Bruno looked over at the quivering woman in the corner. "My God, you're scaring her to death. This is repugnant."

Michelle went back one more time to the well. He refused yet again, leading them all out of the room, berating them as he did. What the hell could happen to him in a funeral home? Was the eighty-year-old widow going to jump him? Was the dead man going to come back to life? Michelle sensed that her protectee was really upset because she was costing him valuable campaign time. Yet it wasn't her idea to come here. However, Bruno was in no mood to hear that.

No chance to win, and the man acted like he was king of the hill. Of course, on election day the voters, including Michelle, would kick his butt right out the door.

As a compromise Michelle asked for two minutes to sweep the room. This was granted, and her men moved quickly to do so while she silently fumed, telling herself that she had to save her ammo for the really important battles.

Her men came out 120 seconds later and reported everything okay. Only one door in and out. No windows. Old lady and dead guy the only occupants. It was cool. Not perfect, but okay. Michelle nodded at her candidate. Bruno could have his private face time, and then they could get out of here.

Inside the viewing room, Bruno closed the door behind him and walked over to the open coffin. There was another coffin against the far wall; it was also open, but empty. The deceased's coffin was resting on a raised platform with a white skirting that was surrounded waist-high with an assortment of beautiful flowers. Bruno paid his respects to the body lying there, murmuring, "So long, Bill," as he turned to the widow, who'd returned to her chair. He knelt in front of her, gently held one of her hands.

"I'm so sorry, Mildred, so very sorry. He was a good man." The bereaved looked up at him from behind the veil, smiled and then looked down again. Bruno's expression changed and he looked around, though the only other occupant of the room was in no condition to eavesdrop. "Now, you mentioned something else you wanted to talk about. In private."

"Yes," the widow said in a very low voice. "I'm afraid I don't have much time, Mildred. What is it?" In answer she placed a hand on his cheek, and then her fingers touched his neck. Bruno grimaced as he felt the sharp prick against his skin, and then he slipped to the floor unconscious.

 

 

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About the US-presidential election:

 

The presidential election in the United States of America is always a very important event. The last election in the year 2000 was very contested, and maybe there were even some illegal actions as buying votes. But as long as nothing is proved I won’t say anything about it.

This year the election will be on 2nd November, and you can bet on it that it will be an interesting one. The forecasts are 50:50. The incumbent president George W. Bush doesn’t sit as safely as he used to after Nine Eleven. His contender John Kerry on the other hand is gaining a lot of sympathy by moving away from a left wing democrat position towards the middle. He announced tax-cuts for the middle-class and positioned national safety a lot higher on his to-do list than democrats usually do.

At this moment things are quite calm. The election campaigns haven’t really started and everything is about creating a good image. This isn’t working very well for Bush. The accusation of torture in Iraq committed by US-soldiers and the systematic way this has been done puts him and his government into a bad light. A lot of Americans expect Bush to dissociate himself from Defence Secretary Rumsfeld. Experts even say if he doesn’t, there won’t be a chance for Bush to stay in the White House. Other voices say Bush has no chance whatsoever. People want the government to be taken over by the democrats. After a period during which the USA had wars all over the world and even at home, it’s time to change. The hope is great, that the democrats will stop war and terrorism by just not speaking about them.

In any case this is a big political event, which will have a great effect on many things. Especially the economy and Wall Street will show reactions to the outcome of the presidential election. The next few months will show in which direction the US-electors tend, and therefore the two main candidates Bush and Kerry (in alphabetical order, not by preference), will be chasing votes. The third party candidates are just there for symbolic reasons and will only get votes if somebody wants to protest against the Democrats and the Republicans.

Keep informed about the latest news in the election case, and expect surprises and some dirty tricks…

 

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